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poems
Jul 27 2007, 1:48 PM EDT
The Las Vegas poem I particularly like for the quality of fairy-tale, which captures the pull of the place for I imagine most people who go there. The filmic nature of the second one is striking. I wonder if the first stanza which sets the scene could be sharpened a bit. In the second it all gets going.
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