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Grand Union by Lubetkinsue
Jul 21 2007, 1:44 PM EDT
Both poems are excellent. If forced to choose, I would have to say I prefer the second version. The use of the present tense makes it more immediate, almost tangible in its imagary. A hard poem to forget.
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1. RE: Grand Union by Lubetkinsue
Jun 27 2009, 1:59 AM EDT
yes, I prefer the second version too.
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