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Raylanoel
Raylanoel
If I must say something, then nothing will stop the chatter inside
Feb 12 2009, 2:24 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 12 2009, 2:24 PM EST
Life is a seamless mile, unzipping with new words you couldnt have guessed existed a moment ago. Am startled by the Life.
An admirer. spilling with new secrets I cannot really tell till ....... 1  out of 1 found this valuable. Do you?    
DCTacitus
DCTacitus
1. RE: If I must say something, then nothing will stop the chatter inside
Feb 15 2009, 2:11 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 15 2009, 2:11 PM EST
When I read your words 'life is a seamless mile', I thought of driving a fast car or travelling on a speeding train. It's an exhilarating experience, but one might get carried away! What will one see next on one's journey - a pile of litter, a scrapyard, a beautiful wood? Do you find this valuable?    
Raylanoel
Raylanoel
2. RE: If I must say something, then nothing will stop the chatter inside
Feb 16 2009, 7:22 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 16 2009, 7:22 AM EST
"When I read your words 'life is a seamless mile', I thought of driving a fast car or travelling on a speeding train. It's an exhilarating experience, but one might get carried away! What will one see next on one's journey - a pile of litter, a scrapyard, a beautiful wood?"
Oh it can be your slippers too, a bullock cart... even a smile...
hadnt realised I'd written that - at 0 hrs in the morning, the heads a bit too lucid I guess ; but then, at the moment, life IS abreathless journey and all of the scrapyard and beautiful wood. How bang on that was am laughing and cant stop. Our home's been re located / our entire life.. and its beautiful silly sweet even awesome in bits. Know what Ive never settled in one real house for long, life happened at that pace. ( From early years in the Lighthouse Compound to now.. its priceless and hard to unravel / understand. So its this rollercoaster actually - Maybe we will all finally settle in, husband, our three lovely kids and dog and I - but I know that ' mile ' will still go on Do you find this valuable?    

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