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| poetryid | David's poems | 0 | Jul 31 2007, 7:01 AM EDT by poetryid | ||
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Thread started: Jul 31 2007, 7:01 AM EDT
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Enjoyed both of these poems. I particularly liked the feeling of moving through the landscape, you manage to convey in 'Chasing Sunsets' and the concurrent sense of moving through life towards another ending- every day being a journey of some sort. Beautiful photographs.
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| lubetkinsue | poems | 0 | Jul 27 2007, 1:48 PM EDT by lubetkinsue | ||
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The Las Vegas poem I particularly like for the quality of fairy-tale, which captures the pull of the place for I imagine most people who go there. The filmic nature of the second one is striking. I wonder if the first stanza which sets the scene could be sharpened a bit. In the second it all gets going.
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| lubetkinsue | poems and pictures | 0 | Jul 27 2007, 1:41 PM EDT by lubetkinsue | ||
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Great to read the poems and have the pictures too. More comments to follow.
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